(Translation) Aka no Hanayome vol. 3

紅ノ華嫁 ~参ノ候補 樹岡繁臣~ (R18! Proceed only if you’re above 18)

CV. Fujiwara Yuuki


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Summary: In Hanabusa family, the selection of the head of the family head involves the appearance of a distinct flower mark on the ‘selected’ person’s body. Apparently, the flower mark will appear on the selected bride, too. The marks will develop/bloom as the more both of the flower bearers get close to each other.

You’ve been working as a maid for the family, but on one very rare day, you’ve got 4 different flower marks appearing on your body. These flower marks correspond to 4 different guys in the family, and it’s decided that whoever manages to fully bloom the flower marks first will become the new family head. You get to spend time with each candidate; the CD actually starts on the final month of your ‘getting close’ process.

T/N: There are 4 volumes for this series (for each candidate), and this is the 3rd volume, about the candidate who’s also your classmate. He is not from the main Hanabusa family, but from the branch family, so he’s not an immediate family member of the other Hanabusa guys.

I really like the whole plot/concept, I wish there was more lmao. He’s such a sweetheart! I feel that the cover doesn’t do him justice lol. And he’s got a bit of an accent ahahahah >////<

Full translation under the cut, with comments at the end of the post.

Disclaimer: Lots and lots of liberties are taken in this volume. So, probably not 100% correct.


1.同級生の花嫁候補 (The classmate’s prospective bride)

The track starts with the noise of the night. You’re walking to the place you’re supposed to spend the month at…. When you knock, he asks you to just enter and there’s no need to be so civil. He’s just from the branch family anyway. Whether he’s the family head or not, or even about this whole family head selection thing, he doesn’t really mind. If anything, he finds it a bother. He complains about it a for while, muttering to himself about his annoyance.

He expresses his sorry for the trouble you’re going through in this whole process, including that you have to stay in this house (which is a place reserved for you guys to live together in). He then says that rambling about it won’t change things anyway..

[01.27]

“This place is huge but it’s ridiculously empty… There’s not even a TV here. Are you fine with that?”

“That’s fine then… By the way, don’t use formal language… This is not the Hanabusa mansion. Just treat me the same like the way we are in class, that’s more comfortable.”

He starts to tell you where the toilet and bathroom are, but in midst of it he says there’s no need since you can see it for yourself.

“For the futon, I’ve already set it up there, but can move it to where you like. I tried to prepare most of the things for you, that’s the least I could do. What else… Is there anything else that you need?”

“I told you, just treat me like a family! You don’t need to be so formal.”

It seems like you’re apologizing for the trouble, so he says it’s no problem and that you’re asked to live here, isn’t it? It isn’t like you wanted this, so it’s okay. He assures that he will take care of the meals (go to the main building and get the food).

[02.23]

“Also, I want you to please don’t be away from me. I said this earlier.. When my colleagues knew that I was chosen to be a family head candidate, they were really jealous. They completely ignored my opinions, even as a son they completely turned deaf ears on me. I don’t know what they’d do to you. I’ll try my best to not cause any inconvenience for you, so please.”

“I said that I’ll look after you, you’re basically like a royalty now, you know. It might be a little uneasy for you, but you can spend your time here however you like. Treat it as a vacation of some sorts, you haven’t had an off day, have you?”

Now that it’s settled, he’s going to return to whatever he was working on. He says he will bring breakfast tomorrow, but then muses that it’s bad if he enters suddenly. He will text you before to ask whether it’s convenient to come in, so tell him if it’s okay to enter.

You ask him whether you want to see the mark, which is the same as the one he has on his hand. He says it’s fine if he doesn’t see it… He mutters if he turns out to not become the head of the family, it’ll be a troublesome for you, right?…. You ask him what he’s saying to himself but he says nah it’s nothing.

He says you can see the shadow so you’ll know if anyone’s coming in, then he greets you good night and exits.


[04.39]

“Ah! I’m sorry! I forgot it’s still dark…. You finished your bath? Thank goodness you’re not in the middle of it.”

“By the way, the lock.. why didn’t you lock it? I feel bad for suddenly coming in like this.”

“It’s not that I want you to apologize… Instead.. I should apologize!! Sorry you have to live with me in this house… My family would be able to keep a lookout if we lived in the main building. They’re really angry that I couldn’t bring my hanayome home.” (?)

“Well, I’m fine with them being angry, but if I refuse…. You know, you being the hanayome bride and all… it could become a mess…. Being together day and night, normally I couldn’t even think about it. So when I heard that I’d be living with you, I didn’t want to hear it anymore (?)… All of this despite me asking you to feel at home… I’m really sorry!”

“Even if I try hard, you won’t truly be comfortable, right?….. Throwing people at the marriageable age in the same house…what are they thinking?… As I thought, I’m going to lodge a complaint one more time.”

“But!! 24/7 is just..!!”

“You’re also sleeping here at night, right?… That’s risky…”

“Why are you laughing with that face…?”

“Outside…? OUTSIDE?? This house is here for us to stay in, why did you even think of sleeping outside?”

Apparently you suggest that you sleep outside, and he strongly rejects the idea. He says if you want to sleep outside, then he will sleep outside instead. You insist on sleeping outside though, so he goes on a lecture. You laugh in the midst of his complaint and he asks you to not laugh, but resigns to you (and agrees to sleep in the room too). He laughs too and comments on how stubborn you are.

He gets the futon (and comments on how convenient that there are exactly 2 sets of futon). You sleep there, and he’s going to sleep inside the closet.

T/N: In case you didn’t know, this is the closet which he’s referring to.

[08.05]

“This room doesn’t have any separating partition, it can’t be helped right? It’s fine, I can get in if I bend my feet a bit.”

“That’s because you’re short. This closet is too small to fit in anyone else.”

“W-why are you getting in?”

“Hey… I’m happy you are inside the bed, but not this one… It’s decided that this one is my futon, yours is over there… Go out…”

“Ouch…it’s cold… I-I’m sorry! I’ll get off now!”

He falls down on top of you, but he got nervous and stands up too quickly so he bangs into something. You laugh at him, & he mutters that you really do like to laugh….

Since you want to sleep inside the closet too, he offers you an option whether you want to sleep at the top bunk or the lower one, but it’s not his fault if it’s not comfortable there okay?

Before going to sleep, he asks whether it’s okay to turn off the lights, mumbling that this room doesn’t have a small lamp. Then he turns the lights off and says good night.


[10.44]

“You asleep already?… Sorry you have to go through all of this.”

“This family head ritual thing… I never thought that I could be one or that there’s such a thing. Even if there was, I thought it was none of my business.”

“Even if I’m the eldest son, I’m just from the branch family. Plus, you’re always with Hanabusa Mizuho, right?” (*the guy from vol.1)

“I know that. I know he’s a relative… But whenever I see you, you’re always together with him.”

“Even if I don’t like it, it always come to view.”(?)

He’s talking about Hanabusa Mizuho, whom you serve mostly. You’re kind of like a personal maid to Mizuho, following him around and such. Thus he’s saying like he needs to apologize to Mizuho because you’re spending 1 month with him (taking away his personal maid).

He muses that usually there’s only 1 hanayome, right? This time 1 hanayome is tied to 4 guys… And everything is up to the hanayome bride…

He gets a bit pessimistic as he accidentally blurts out it would be a problem if he really falls in love with you..

He realizes what he says and nervously tries to explain that he doesn’t mean it that way and tries to divert the topic to today’s homework. He then apologizes, saying that it doesn’t matter either way, right? He discloses he never expected all this would happen; it’s hard to believe this is a reality, being a candidate for the family head or sleeping together like this. But it is indeed reality; him being a family head candidate & you being the chosen hanayome bride…

Being the chosen hanayome must’ve been hard on you, right?…You have to stay together with all the candidates, one guy at a time… It’s terrible. He blames the ancestors for coming up with such kind of thing/ritual… He angrily hopes this ‘curse’ will stop… It’s not like we chose to be born in this house..

He apologizes to you for having to go through this… And apologizes again for disrupting your sleep.


2.日常だったはずの世界 (Ordinary world as usual)

“Sorry for making you wait…. Why? A text? You’re scrunching up your eyebrows so much, what is it? Is it a big problem?”

It seems like it’s a text from Mizuho… Mizuho gets a maid replacement since you’re spending the month with him. He mumbles a bit about this, saying like ‘can’t he live for a month without his maid?’ He whines a bit saying that Mizuho should have tea on his own and leave you alone for a while. Since you’re on a date with him, you decide to follow him..


[01.36]

You’re at the arcade; he asks you why do you keep looking around, could this be your first time. You say it’s not, you go out sometimes too. He mumbles about you being always on Mizuho’s side again (which makes you unable to enjoy life), he invites you to play a crane game* and he gets a doll for you. He teaches you how to play it, but in the midst of it you get the dizziness from the hanayome effect.

*T/N: The doll-grabbing machine game, in which you move the crane to grab a doll…aka one of the most frustrating game ever.

He gets really worried and asks you whether he should call an ambulance, but you say there’s a medicine in your bag. He stumbles to find it; the medicine isn’t a normal medicine, but he feeds it to you anyway. The dizziness soon goes away and he apologizes for overreacting. He asks for your hand and slowly leads you outside because it’s noisy here.

[05.51]

He gets you seated somewhere and goes to buy you a drink. When he returns, he bought you some tea, and asks you whether you’ve got some kind of illness. You tell him that it’s the hanayome effect. He calls it a curse again and asks you why didn’t you tell him such an important thing. Boy gets angry, why the hell is this happening to you…

You assure him it’s fine; he says don’t pretend to be strong… He apologizes for not knowing this… You’re still trembling, he asks again why are you keeping this suffering to yourself. Is there anything he can do? As long as it will ease your burden, no matter what, he would do it. He will think seriously about this family head candidate thing, so please rely on him more!

He apologizes for getting heated up, also for grabbing your hands earlier.

[08.49]

“Uwah… What the heck did I do…it’s so embarrassing…”

“But, I was being serious just now, if there’s anything I can do, please tell me. I know I’m not that reliable..but I’ll try my best.”


3.目覚めた本能 (Awakened instincts)

You’re in the school clinic. He knocks and comes in, and apparently the nurse is out. He asks about your condition & he has brought your bag. He asks whether it’s the hanayome effect again?… You probably have a fever because he’s commenting that your face is red… He gets worried about you passing out and complains where the heck is the nurse?! He says he’ll go get the nurse and asks you to rest for a little more, but your dizziness comes again and you grab him. He assures you he will be back very soon, but you pull him and pin him down.

[01.54]

“What is it? Why are you suddenly—”

“O-Oi!! Where are you touching! What– Wait!! Calm down! Stop it!”

“You’re acting strange… Why did you suddenly do that? Is it anything about me?.. Hey, are you listening? Oi… Are you alright? You don’t look good…. Don’t tell me is the dizziness again??”

“Oi? Why? What’s wrong? What the heck is happening? You’re being really weird… Oi, let me go! Don’t grab so tight!”

“What? What are you doing– it hurts! Release your fingers..”

“Ouch…”

“Uwaa.. You seem to be in pain… What’s happening? Is this because of the dizziness too?”

“Oi… Are you alright? Sorry, I pushed you away so hard earlier. Does it hurt anywhere?”

“Hey you…you have to tell me when you feel pain– EH, Oii.. what are you.. Let me go… don’t touch….why is this…”

“What? Why…? What’s wrong with you??… Stop…if you do that…”

“What? What do you want?… stop….such things…you’re being really weird…”

“Don’t touch down there…”

“Hey… what’s happening..?? Tell me properly… this is too strange… what do you want?… you don’t really want to do such thing, right…be honest..”

“I can’t… I really can’t hold it…. I beg of you…let me go already..!….it’s going to come out…”

“I really can’t hold it in anymore.. I beg of you, let me go…..ahh…”

“Just now…what was it??? I…you..why is this happening?? What in the world happened to you? Is this related to the hanayome effect?…. I don’t know what’s the meaning of this….”

You run away, leaving him in the clinic. (T/N: Poor guy got abandoned after getting a blowjob… lmao)


4.罰がチャンスになる (A chance for punishment)

“I told you you have to lock–hm? where did you go? You’re not in pain anymore right?”

“You’re in there, right?”

“I know it’s hard to face each other, but please come out… Open up.”

“Look, you’re not a child anymore, what’s this with hiding in the closet? It will be difficult to talk like this. Come on out.”

“I’m not mad or anything..”

“I was so worried… How’s your condition?”

“Then it’s all good. Sorry for being a bit late. I thought I have to let the Hanabusa family know about your condition, so I went there for a while. I met Kouki-san, he told me everything about this hanayome candidate thing.. I also know about your dizziness now.”

“Don’t lower your head! You don’t need to apologize!”

“The one who needs to apologize is me! Sorry! I didn’t know much about this hanayome candidate ritual, I only thought about myself. In the end, I didn’t even know the suffering you go through. I will take myself seriously as the hanayome candidate, so please tell me if you get the dizziness. I’m really sorry!”

“I didn’t do it on purpose, but still I want to apologize.”

“You chose me, but I didn’t cherish it, in the end all the pain goes back to you.(?) I’m really the worst!”

“…I’ve heard from Kouki-san… Ah, that wasn’t what he said! We were talking about the hanayome ritual & the details…”

He talks a bit about being a hanayome candidate and not being received as such (?), and then says that he heard that if you got the dizziness, either you take the medicine, or you have to get close to the candidate to reduce/make the pain disappear. If you don’t, the pain will get stronger (?). Thus, now he understands why you did what you did today and also your quick escape; saying that’s all his fault… He asks you whether you’re shocked and apologizes, bowing down again..

You respond and he protests, saying that you have to tell him everything. He apologizes again for causing such suffering on you. He’s about to say something, but you get the dizziness again. He gives you the medicine and the pain goes away. He expresses his relief that the pain goes away (so that you don’t have to do such things to him like before), but he quickly explains that it wasn’t what he meant while muttering ‘why am I so dumb…’

He’s sitting formally (that traditional Japanese position with feet folded), you comment on it and he says he has to do so because he has something important to say from now on.

[05.36]

“Look… I… I love you!”

“I am a family head candidate and you’re a hanayome, that’s a sure thing, however…. I want to tell you properly.”

“From now on, when you get the dizziness, I will touch you so it will stop. But, I want to touch you because I love you, and not just because the dizziness. I want you to know that.”

“Suddenly confessing like this, suddenly saying such things… Are you bothered by it?… But I’m not lying..”

“There might be times when you want to do it to stop your dizziness, and when that time comes, I will touch you, okay?”

“I love you, however… I don’t know your feelings… No, it’s not that I’m expecting for an answer or anything!..”

“When you get the dizziness, I don’t know what/how you want me to do to stop it… I’m okay with whatever though! I love you, so…”

“But…you’re different. What I should do to stop your dizziness when it comes, please tell me honestly.”

The track ends with him reprimanding himself…. Poor baby.


5.花に憧れ恋に焦がれる (Yearning for a love blooming like flower)

“I’m sorry for always pushing my feelings.”

“A little while ago, what I said about taking care of your dizziness… is it too sudden.”(?)

“Look, perhaps, from now on until the end of the month you’re spending with me, you won’t get dizziness anymore.”

“Well, we’ll worry about that when it comes—wa-why are you making a face like you’re going to cry??… Sorry! I suddenly said so many things…”

“Tears of joy..?? Really? Your feelings are…”

“I’m extremely happy… This is not a dream, right?”

“Ouch!!”

“If it hurts, then this is surely not a dream. I said that in the meaning of wanting you to be my girlfriend…are you okay with that?”

“Seriously? Seriously…?? *clears throat* Then… Once again, I’ll be in your care.”

“I hope I’m not asking too much but…can I kiss you?”

“That face is not fair… It’s too cute to resist.”

“Umm… Can you close your eyes? It’s difficult to do it when you’re looking… Sorry.”

“I didn’t think you’d become my girlfriend… I’m so happy.”

“Can I hug you too?”

“I knew this but you’re small after all…”

“Sorry I’ve been unreasonable till now… I will definitely try to protect you, I don’t care if I’m just from the branch family, I will become the Hanabusa family head. And, you’ll be my hanayome bride. I won’t have any complaints.”

[03.20]

“Can I see the flower mark?… The same mark that I have on my hand… where is your mark located at?”

“Ah, that’s right… Now I can’t see it because it’s hidden by the clothes, right?… I’m so sorry.”

“It’s near the shoulder, huh…. so this is my flower… it’s redder than I thought. The mark on my hand is lighter. Since your body is pale, the shade of red looks beautiful.”

“This is our red flower mark…”

“It’s really mine…”

“Your body is soft… It makes me want to bite…”

“Sorry, somehow I’m unable to stop…”

“If you dislike it, you can hit me.”

“If you say that, I really won’t stop, okay? I don’t think I can control myself. Is that fine?”

“Okay, I will try to take it as slow as I can, but I’m sorry if I fail, because now I am really aroused.”

“I’m going to touch your chest, okay?.. I’ll do it gently but I don’t know how it feels to you… please tell me if it hurts.”

“So soft… What’s this…”

“Could it be that your ears are sensitive? Because when I lick it…see, you jerked up.”

“You’re cute. Hm, can I remove all your clothes? I want to touch your breasts properly.”

“As I thought, your body is pale… I’ll take this off too, okay?”

“Look at me… Don’t hide it with your hands. You’re really stubborn.(?)”

“Are these the marks from the other candidates? I see…. They all have their own flower marks (on you) too… It’s a bit…irritating.”

“I know it’s greedy of me, but I want all of you. Your neck…. your shoulder…your arms…your chest… can I have it all to myself?”

“Your breasts are amazingly soft…they feel so smooth around my hands.”

“Hey… Are you feeling it? Here… I can hear it thumping.. It’s fine, right?”

“Can I rub it with my fingers? Is it good if I position my fingers like this? Because when I rubbed it, you let out a really cute sound.”

“Hey! I want to hear your voice.”

“Don’t be embarrassed, only both of us will hear it.”

“Please remove your hands, alright?”

“Hmm… Then…. If you keep covering with your hand, I’ll just make you let your voice out.”

“Your ears are sensitive after all….and so are your breasts.”

[09.49]

“Do you like it when I rub here? … Then I’ll apply some pressure… That voice just now was cute. I want to hear more.”

“Hm? If I stop teasing, are you willing to stop covering your mouth?(?)….. If you keep being stubborn I won’t be able to enter you..”

“Or, you still want me to lick you more?”

“Can I kiss you more, on the lips?”

“I’m going to touch you down there, okay?”

“It looks wet… you felt good, right?”

“The underwear is obstructing….. Ah, as I thought, you’re wet.”

“If it’s slippery like this, it means you’re feeling good.”

“Sorry, can we shift around a little? My arms feel a bit heavy.”

“Does lying against the tatami* hurt your back?”

*T/N: Japanese straw mat flooring.

“If it hurts, let’s move to the futon.”

“..Really?”

“Well, you tend to push yourself.”

“This mark… It’s a Chinese bellflower… Is it Hanabusa Mizuho’s?”

“If I put hickeys around the mark, whatever flower it is, it can’t be seen anymore, right?”

“Just now, you thought ‘How childish!’ didn’t you?”

“Don’t laugh like that!… Well, be that as it may, that’s really what I feel.”

“So soft….. Do you feel good? Let out your voice… Don’t suppress it… Let me hear everything.”

“And don’t remember anyone else but me. Don’t touch anybody else… I won’t let anybody else touch you.”

“Your kiss feel so good..”

“Your chest too?”

“You like it when I lick? Your underwear… I think it’s better to remove it. Raise your hips a bit. It’s okay, I’ll do it.”

“It’s already soaked. Does it feel good here?”

“Because, your hips jerk up when I touch there.”

“Gosh… you’re so darn cute.”

“More? Ah, then can I put in my finger?”

“Sorry, but I’m going to put it in.”

“It’s hot inside… It’s so slippery, my fingers instantly went deep inside.”

“Does it hurt?…. That’s a relief. Is it okay too if I move my fingers?”

“Amazing… it’s so smooth inside..”

“I’m sorry, I can’t hold back.”

“Wait, let’s remove our clothes.”

“You’re really beautiful… I know there are other flower marks, but they look like flowers blooming on your pale white body. It’s really beautiful.”

“Sorry I spaced out a bit. I’m going to enter now. Let’s close our eyes together.”

“Tell me if it hurts. I’ll try hard to hold back and not go wild.”

“Don’t laugh. That’s because I want do the best I could. Let’s do it while kissing…”

“It’s twitching… Oh no, this is too good…what should I do…my hip wants to move on its own…”

“Sorry, I really can’t hold on for much longer…. I’m going to move, is it okay?”

“It’s too good… I’m going to come soon… This feels amazing…”

“Na, wrap your arms around my neck..”

“Yeah… Hugging tightly like this feels good right?”

“Gosh…. if it’s this good, I can’t hear anything else…”

“It’s clenching… Are you going to come? .. Me too, I can’t hold it anymore.”

“I can’t… I’m already gonna come….”

[19.24]

“Sorry, I just…. did you come properly? It got really dangerous at the last moment–OUCH.”

“You know, even if you’re embarrassed, don’t hit me.”

“Is your back alright? Things got a bit heated up… was it scraping against the floor? Let me take a look.”

“It won’t be good if your back got bruised, let me see.”

“If it’s alright then just let me see it, won’t you?”

“You’re so stubborn.”

He starts tickling you, but you tickle him back, leaving him in a pool of laughter.

[20.27]

“Not there! That’s unfair!”

“Oops. A different switch just turned on.”

“You should’ve let me see it earlier.”

“It’s too late now.”

“Take responsibility for this…”


6.紅い向日葵 (Red sunflower)

“Have you finished organizing your luggage?”

“If you forgot anything, contact me asap.”

“Time passed so quickly.. Today is already the last day.”

“Before going home, can I check the mark?”

“Can I take a look at your back? Well, it’s the last time..”

“It has grown like this..??”

“Ah, you can’t see it for yourself because it’s on the back, right? Let’s go to the washroom. There’s a mirror there so you can see it.”

“Can you see it? It has become really defined… This is a sunflower, right? Actually, when the mark appeared on my hand, I was a little annoyed. At that time, I didn’t know it was about the family head selection or whatever. About sunflowers… it’s not like I like them that much.”

“I get that a lot. Until now, when people say it suits me or whatever, I didn’t think of it that much. I’ve heard that it goes by hana kotoba (the meaning of flowers), so it’s a little… I think…it’s me.“(?)

“Ah, but now it’s fine! I’m not only staring at it, it’s on my hand now.”

“What am I even saying… Sorry, I’m probably a bit out of it.”

“This mark won’t lose to the others, right? That means it’s okay for me to become the finalist, right?”

“Me too, I’ll be really happy if I can become the only hanayome candidate for you.”

“But we still don’t know when it will happen, right? Well, but that’s for sure since who will be the family head is not exactly decided yet. But, I’m getting there. I definitely won’t give up on you, never. So, don’t choose other guys, okay?”


T/N: OKAY!!!!!!! 100 TIMES OKAY BABE!!!!!!!!

lmao

GUHHH I’m so sorry for this one there are lots and lots of things that I couldn’t understand due to his way of speech so I had to take a lot of liberties here and there. I hope someone more knowledgeable will furnish this so I could convey the story correctly.

This series’ plot is one of my favorite tbh. My crap translation isn’t doing it justice. I love how the story connects to the other volumes and how it mentions the other guys/candidates without being annoying. lmao BUT POOR GUY GOT WALKED OUT ON AFTER GETTING A BJ.

I love how humble he is WHILE keeping that pouty character going on. He’s just so cute.

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